Thank you for all the tips from the first round of this invite. I made some updates and am quite happy with how it turned out. I think varying the stroke weight of the lettering helped a lot with legibility.
Holly, I’m so sorry. I could have sworn that I left a comment last Friday, but it might have been only in my head.
Anyway, what was/is going through my head is that this turned out really nice. The changes are excellent and the hierarchy and overall layout are much improved from an already nice piece. Well done.
Holly, I’m so sorry. I could have sworn that I left a comment last Friday, but it might have been only in my head.
Anyway, what was/is going through my head is that this turned out really nice. The changes are excellent and the hierarchy and overall layout are much improved from an already nice piece. Well done.